Week 9 Feedback&development of the cover

We start to work on the booklet
Feedback for the covers:

 That is the first version that i print out.
1. The pattern needs to be bigger. The pattern looks smaller than the ones on the poster. Because when it is presented on a smaller scale media, it does not look the same.
2. The headline can be closer to the small text
3. the text at the bottle can ally with the one above.

The second version:

1. The pattern is still not big enough.

2. The text is too close to the headline this time.

Just as my tutor mentioned, the headline does not look good somehow, so this time, i use "Architecture Series" instead (just like i used in the posters).