Week 11 Feedback on Friday(class)
Calendar:
Feedback
1. The title going through in the middle does not work. It interrupts the calendar. Besides, it does not have the kind of consistency with the poster, the text could use "regular" instead to match the poster.
2. The color is a big issue. When i print it out, the pink is too strong that it is hard to read the text.
3. When it was print into large scale, the pattern on the left does not match the one on the poster.
4. Technical issue: use the paragraph style instead of organizing each text block each time.
Booklet:
Feedback
1. The title going through in the middle does not work. It interrupts the calendar. Besides, it does not have the kind of consistency with the poster, the text could use "regular" instead to match the poster.
2. The color is a big issue. When i print it out, the pink is too strong that it is hard to read the text.
3. When it was print into large scale, the pattern on the left does not match the one on the poster.
4. Technical issue: use the paragraph style instead of organizing each text block each time.
Booklet:
Feedback:
1. The intro page: The pattern on the right does not fit. It can be placed onto the lower-left corner.
2. It is better to get the consistency among each speaker page.
3. The doctrine font on the calendar does not show up on anywhere on the booklet (consistency).
4. About the Key speaker page:
It looks too busy on the upper left corner.
The pattern on the left is unnecessary. It can be place either at the bottle of the page or be abandoned.
There is one paragraph hanging under the title which it does not exist on the other speaker page. It is better to put it with the other text block (all about consistency).
5.The color of the pattern should be more closed to the calendar.
6.The page of calendar date needs a picture. The layout can be consistent with the calendar.





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